[ENG Ver.] [Work of the Fallen Angel] 1st / Treila-chan’s First Service

Editorial Review

★3.7 / 5 — henhenta editorial rating (our own assessment, not the DLsite official user score)

Wish-fulfillment fantasy in its most distilled form, this opener sits in the crowded lane of “heaven-sent companion for the unlucky man” stories, where a supernatural woman arrives to cure romantic loneliness. The circle is refreshingly upfront about its priorities: the author’s stated goal is minimal setup with roughly nine-tenths of the page count devoted to the erotic content. That puts it closer to the lean, scene-first end of the genre than to the slow-burn narrative end.

What sets it apart is the premise’s neat internal logic. The man isn’t simply lonely. He is fated never to be involved with women, and the angel Treila exists as the cosmic compensation for that deficit. It’s a small touch, but it gives the fantasy a built-in justification that many comparable works skip. Treila herself is written as newly born and pure-hearted, so the appeal rests on innocence and eager devotion rather than experience. The package is also practical: 29 pages of main story plus a 30-page textless version, which is a considerate extra for readers who prefer to take in the artwork without dialogue. It’s also a redrawn, readjusted take on an earlier angel story, with the author promising to carry it through to a proper conclusion, so this is clearly the first installment of a planned series. Note that the English release, translated through Translators Unite, omits the limited-time exclusive content.

Readers who favor innocent, devoted heroines and straightforward comfort-driven fantasy will get the most from it, especially those who like their stories short on preamble.

Verdict: A candid, no-frills first chapter that promises exactly what it delivers, best suited to those who want the premise stated and the payoff arriving quickly.